【schooldays攻略】专题中考英语写作训练指导-讲述学校生活

写作任务

假设你是林涛。以下是你笔友托尼写给你的电子邮件。请根据邮件内容给他发一封邮件。(大卫亚设)。

要求:

1. 请结合自己的实际情况，适当发挥；

2. 词数：100左右

写作思路与分析

此篇习作要求我们回复一封邮件，谈一谈自己的学校生活。

首先，我们需要仔细阅读来自Tony的邮件。根据邮件内容，我们可知Tony向林韬提出了三个问题，即：

问题一：How long do you stay in school every day?

问题二：What is your favourite subject?

问题三：Do you take part in after-school activities?

这些问题的答案就是要回复的主要内容。因此，我们可以从这三方面(学校的上课时间、最喜欢的科目、课余活动)来谈论自己的学校生活。

其次，根据自身的实际情况自由发挥，并将各个问题的答案进行整合，使之成为一篇符合逻辑、条理清晰、语言正确的文章。

此篇习作应用第一人称进行叙述，时态以一般现在时为宜。

词汇储备

★常见课程：

Chinese, maths, English, history, geography, biology (生物), chemistry, physics, PE, IT, art, music, algebra (代数), geometry (几何)

★其他可能用到的词汇：

动词：finish, end, teach, learn, last, begin

形容词：helpful, interesting, boring, difficult, easy, colourful, meaningful, compulsory (必修的)

短语：be good at, be interested in, different kinds of, have a break / rest, such as

句型荟萃

★开头：

1. I’d like to introduce my school life to you.

2. I’m glad to tell you something about my school life.

3. I’m writing to say something about my school life.

4. Now let me answer all of your questions about my school life.

5. Now that you wonder what school life in my country is like, I’d like to tell you something about it.

★主体：

1. The schoolday begins at … and finishes at …

2. I go to school every weekday from … to …

3. It is a big school with a large playground …

4. My school, which is modern, has a gym …

5. There are eight 45-minute lessons.

6. I have eight classes and each one lasts … minutes.

7. The subjects are all compulsory, including maths …

8. My favourite subject is … and I dislike …

9. In the afternoon, we have two more lessons before school finishes.

10. I’m not interested in maths at all, because it’s too difficult.

11. Some after-school activities are provided by the school clubs, such as …

12. We often take part in all kinds of sporting activities after school, like running, playing basketball and swimming.

★结尾：

1. I enjoy my school life very much.

2. I’ve been so busy this school year but I feel happy.

3. Although sometimes I feel tired, I still think that my school life is colourful.

4. I like everything about my school, the classroom, the library, the clubs … and above all, my friends.

5. These unforgettable schooldays will be my sweet memories.

范文展示

Dear Tony,

I’m very glad to hear from you. Now that you wonder what my school life is like, I’d like to tell you something about it. My school is big and modern with 30 classrooms, a large playground and two dining halls. I go to school every weekday from 8:10 am to 5:40 pm. In the morning, four 45-minute lessons are offered, with a 30-minute break in between. In the afternoon, we have four lessons, too.

The subjects we have are all compulsory, including maths, Chinese and English. I like English better than any other subject. I can not only speak English well but also get good marks in English exams.

My favourite part is that I can take part in many after-school activities such as taking school trips and attending the English Corner.

That’s my colourful school life.

Best wishes,

Lin Tao